As we are going to create a new storyboard the
- Ellie properly singing
- Avoid windows - because of backlight dominance
- Avoid filming the radiator
- Let go of the banister whilst walking down the stairs
- Remove the non-smoking sign (cover it with white paper)
- Make Ellie look more 'engaging visually' - doesn't suit 'cold and aloof'
- Include intro and outro text 'INFLUXX'
- Ensure the lighting is continuous throughout the day 2:04-2:10
- Timing issues around 2:31
- Framing issues (camera needs to be level)
- Shot of Ellie starting at her abdomen up to her face is too long, we need to cut the shot
- Continuity!!
Shots to keep:
- mainly ones with Alex
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